1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。1、原文：DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixuetingliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwater,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.ThesamplesweredeterminatedbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Result:Theaveragerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid修正：DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxuetingoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedindistilledwater,andthenextracted（intothesample删去）withwater-saturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.ThesamplesweresubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(λS=280nm,λR=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,（and删去）RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3（five删去）batchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandfeasible.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;ChuxuetingoralLiquids;Determination;Gallicacid点评：1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”，故改之。3、斜体n表示“正”。